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"London University"?
This is nit-picking, I appreciate. But there is no 'London University' and as a Londoner that was actually quite jarring to read. It would have taken 1 minute of Googling to have found and used the correct name for a university.
yes London university :P
I did Google it, my friend. And I'm applying for said uni!
University of London: Home
www.lon.ac.uk/
The University of London was founded 175 years ago and is the largest University in the United Kingdom
quick question
Will you make this a series or just a single story?
I liked it.
Continuing with the nitpicking
HI,
Good draft. Please slow it down and take time to develop the scenes and transitions. Also, please get an editor. Otherwise, keep writing
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