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You are the Poker Night Waitress

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by Anonymous10/22/14

Good start

Your voice is lovely I think now it's just a matter of developing your story and engaging your audience. I hope to hear more ;3

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by livimason43410/29/14

great

Good start love your voice moan little more and engage yourself more into your stories it'll be better keep trying can't wait to hear more :)

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by Anonymous10/31/14

Do more

Oops, I accidentally (originally) posted this in the send feed back option when I meant to put it in the public comments. I agree with the other posters that you should do more because this was a good start. Like one of the other commenters said, I just wanted you to feel more engaged in it.

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by Anonymous11/06/14

amazing!

I was just looking for some Male dominant stories to pleasure my cunt to and yours pleased me so good. You had me over the edge when you said "My cock is so hard". I moaned out loud to one of the best orgasms I've had. Thanks! ;)

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by Anonymous11/06/14

I liked it

I liked it and the idea alone is a fantasy of mine. I agree with a few others about developing your story telling skills but it takes practice so don't let it get you down, take it on board and make more and show 'em how it's done. Honestly I wanna hear more.

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