A Text to My Hotwife

SOUNDS LIKE

The Gold Seal Of Approval For Cuckdom. TK U MLJ LV NV

if she's your wife, and you're not her favourite lover

then all you are is a ride on the gravytrain.

sucks to be you.

Delicious wife and perfect evening!

Your story is delicious. I love that you two are close enough to share such erotic experiences. Sexual exploration is so much more intense with those you care for and love. Great story!
Xoxo

What wasn't told...

How many times the wife goes to her lover? The lover get to fuck her in her town? The only good thing, really different was the husband never talked in eating cream pies...Maybe he is diabetic...

You write a hot story even though I hate this this type of story. I cannot imagine any man wanting his wife traveling and fucking other men. I also don't agree with them both going out and doing this but at least he wouldn't be sitting around while she was out having a grand ole time.

Welcome to Lit

This is a good debut for a new writer, and I thank you for sharing your story.

People in traditional marriages would never understand a storyline like this, and it's no surprise to see the mediocre rating and the usual sprinkling of nasty comments. I appreciated the husband's perspective in this story, although I can't relate to his desire to be second-best. I understand that's a pretty common kink, and I won't knock anyone for having it, but that kink simply doesn't play well in this category.

If future chapters delve further into the submissive nature of the husband or the humiliation aspect of his kink, then I'd suggest moving it to the BDSM category. So far, however, it's a perfect fit for LW.

I gave you an extra star for having the balls to write and submit your own story instead of criticizing others anonymously, so you get five from me.

Hate the format

Give me a fucking break. HotWife is NOT my favorite LW genre, but I understand 'different strokes!' However, Hubby writing a text detailing what he IMAGINES Sweetie is busy doing with her Bull is MAYBE seen by her as sweet and understanding (or even hot and forgiving), but to 'me the reader' it is just DUMB. Why not also imagine the Bull tag-teaming Sweetie with a rampant pony, or a baseball bat while on the pitcher's mound during the seventh inning stretch of a Yankee's game? A fiction within a fiction! Sucky format!

Here We Go Again

If you read the description of this category, this is one of the types of stories that is supposed to fit here--cuckolding wives, along with swinging wives, wife-sharing, and open marriage.
Unfortunately, the category was invaded by stories written by men whose wives have cheated on them unbeknown to them, men who would never want to be cuckolded by a hot wife, so they are not "loving" wives at all, and they are certainly not erotic stories, even though many of them are wonderful stories.
They are, however, stories that more of the readership can relate to, unfortunately, because of the percentage of cheating wives there are today.
So we have two diametrically opposed groups trying to occupy the same space: the smaller group of men for whom the category was created, those who would love their wives to have sex with other men or women, and the larger group, those who have been damaged by the discovery of such behavior, who thought that they were in a traditional marriage with no extra-marital play.

Stories such as these constantly receive comments such as "Put this in 'Fetish' where it belongs." Except that the description of "Fetish" implies an extremely limited kind of behavior, such as foot fetish, in which only a small percentage of husbands who share their wives or allow them to cuckold them are interested. These husbands worship their wives by allowing them wide-ranging extra-marital sexual activities, including sometimes spending extraordinary amounts of time away from husband and family, by taking vacations with their lovers and boyfriends.
Most of the rest of us, men and women, married or not, cheated on or not, no matter how liberal-minded, have great difficulty understanding this desire. The most we might even think of doing is swinging, because then we could get a little "strange" ourselves, but we are scared of the risks involved in opening the marriage, and so suppress those thoughts.

Most of us have just begun to accept that homosexuality is probably not a chosen behavior, but more likely an innate one (they have already found one gene that accounts for 40% of homosexuality). We used to think that gays were sick and needed to be "fixed", and now that we have become aware of voluntary cuckoldry, we believe the same thing. But we seem to know more about the workings of the universe than the human mind.
Someday these stories may be criticized solely on the basis of their literary and erotic value. Until then, author, you will have to suffer the LW Taliban of readers who will denigrate your work strictly on the basis of the traditional view of marriage. They have no idea how much marriage has already changed in the last 100+ years.

Men used to own their wives like property, divorcing them at will and separating them forever from their children. Now women work to support their children during marriage as well, sharing custody after divorce. "Traditional" marriage has changed more than most people know; they are defending something that may as well be standing on quicksand. Like most of our institutions, marriage will change along with the rest of society. Now, women can not only vote, they can run for president. Imagine what the American Taliban of 100 years ago would have thought of that, sitting around in the clubs, smoking their sugars, thinking that white men were destined to rule the world forever.

Hahahahaha

Thank you to those who left constructive feedback or stood up for this poor poor excuse for a man, LOL!! Guess I didn't take enough time reading comments on other stories on the subject I've read, definitely good for a laugh so thank you to those who spewed your hatred and loathing as well! I imagine many authors would be quite proud of inciting such passionate feelings one way or the other.

I find it quite comical that the majority of the posters inferring I'm a pussy or that I'm weak left their comments ananamously or sent them to me directly via email, also ananamously...

There was a disclaimer at the beginning and I'd have thought the title and description would give a pretty indication as to what the subject matter was. I doubt that most of the negative posters of comments here even read it which is fine. But if you read the title, description and disclaimer and then still read the story, I don't see how you can really criticize the subject matter.

Next time shes gone

The next time she takes a trip to NYC, you should find a play date of your own. She sounds lovely. Im sure she wouldn't mind. :)

I agree....

Your wife sounds delicious. Wish I knew where to meet a lovely thing like her.

Gaged on this one

Trash