Pretty good story except for being hard to suspend enough belief to really buy into it. Girl acted more like she was very experienced, not like a first timer, but I'm in my seventies and can hardly remember which armpit its under, so what the crap do I know? GOOD LUCK!
Quite a first time!
Nice start...needs more passion!
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Pretty good story except for being hard to suspend enough belief to really buy into it. Girl acted more like she was very experienced, not like a first timer, but I'm in my seventies and can hardly remember which armpit its under, so what the crap do I know? GOOD LUCK!
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