Sorry you feel that way, but I do appreciate the feedback.
I don't have any gang bangs planned, but the first chapter should have foreshadowed Jeanette being used as a plaything. There will be more intimate encounters between and among the principal characters and their associates as the story unfolds.
Sorry you feel that way, but I do appreciate the feedback.
I don't have any gang bangs planned, but the first chapter should have foreshadowed Jeanette being used as a plaything. There will be more intimate encounters between and among the principal characters and their associates as the story unfolds.
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Anonymous01/08/16
TOTALLY DESTROYED A SEMI-DECENT START...
You should not have shared her so soon, and let them build their relationship. He doesn't know his ass from a hole in the ground and now 'she replied with a sigh. "You're in charge. I just live here."' ... way too fucked up even in a fantasy. 0 stars for ruining a great start
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reply to Millipond
Sorry you feel that way, but I do appreciate the feedback.
I don't have any gang bangs planned, but the first chapter should have foreshadowed Jeanette being used as a plaything. There will be more intimate encounters between and among the principal characters and their associates as the story unfolds.
Reply to Millirond
Sorry you feel that way, but I do appreciate the feedback.
I don't have any gang bangs planned, but the first chapter should have foreshadowed Jeanette being used as a plaything. There will be more intimate encounters between and among the principal characters and their associates as the story unfolds.
TOTALLY DESTROYED A SEMI-DECENT START...
You should not have shared her so soon, and let them build their relationship. He doesn't know his ass from a hole in the ground and now 'she replied with a sigh. "You're in charge. I just live here."' ... way too fucked up even in a fantasy. 0 stars for ruining a great start
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