Alien Flashlight Hypnotizes Women Ch. 01

Loved it! Waiting for next chapter! #1fan!

Interesting!

I'm not a big sci/fi fan, but your treatment of the elements in this story is really fascinating. I look forward to its continuation. Good writing...could use some editing for grammar...but I'm nit picking.

Excellent

One of my favorite subjects( young guy and girl friends Mother )with a new twist. look forward to the next chapter.
Lee

Susan mesmerises us, while Donna stands helpless,....

Great start to the story and wonderfully built tension.
Looking forward to the rest.
You have a gift for this Susan.

A big fan

A great fan of all of your stories hope you continue to write stories as awesome as this one.