Red Callum, Sweet Cate

Great Halloween poem!

Very fun and creepy too. You managed to make the rhymes not sound forced and the story flow with the verse. Five stars.

A Fresh (nice?)

take on e.horror. Enjoyable, but the story has forever put me off of sleeping in a crypt.

Well elocuted

First of all, props to such an inventive Halloween story. Few would try it in a contest.
I liked the rhyming meter, sometimes going with couplets, sometimes four lines. It had everything from fun to horror. The elocution was good, with correct emphasis and release where needed.

I would hate to spoil anybody's crypt-sleeping fun! Just, you know, check up on your partner first and make sure she's not one of the ravening undead.

I didn't think it was possible to be turned on and scared shitless at the same time.
Kingswoman has such a great voice and it pairs with your writing very well.

wow

ill be quite honest & say i dont go for erotic poetry at all but that was great. Sometimes i felt the rhythm was off just in a few spots of character dialogue but otherwise 4 stars for some fantastic effort

oooh awesome

I really loved the gore :)