The Mentalist

Pleasantly different

Nice to find a good story in this category that's not about changing others because you can't get any in any other way. People with such abilities could still be good people. A good read.

Good yarn!

I've enjoyed many of your stories. This one was one of the best. Even Literotica doesn't need every sexual detail all the time. Keep up the good work.

Very pleasant reading

But I would be surprised if it were not.
Thank you

Clever Premise and Interesting Story

I for one would like a second chapter - these characters are interesting. DG and his asides - "guess smoking really can be hazardous to your health." Well done once again DGH.

into the.mystic ( and a few other dark places of varying moistness ) !

Easy, fun read with a bit of mystery. The bad guys go directly to jail sans dollars . Great fun.

r u gonna make 2

The Mentalist

Great Story

4*s

Nicely done!! Interesting characters. But a little more depth of their personality is needed . Especially of the Matt, friend, bodyguard.

His emotional distance from common humanity makes it difficult to develop conflict.
Original plot is very good for this site.
Maybe we will get some " fae " LW story.
Overall 2*s for emotional impact. 4*s for plot and dialogue. 5*s for the creative idea. So 4*s .
Thank You very much. Look forward to the next post, very much lol


AMerryMan

Very cool, fun story.

I don't know if it's sad or what, but I was enjoying the mind reading stuff so much, the sex was almost a distraction! I hope you continue to write and share your stuff. Thank you.

Way to go---#^*/#...

Loved this story #5 rating9e

pure bullshit fantasy

who could ever believe this crap wants their brain examined....stick to reality....

More please

Just continue the story. Enjoyed it.