A Gift From His Father Ch. 21

wow keep the chapters coming 5 stars

Awsome!

Love it!

challenging creativity

Really like ur story line.. have been reading straight for 48 hrs

LIKE IT A LOT!!!

As always I like your installment very much!
Please keep more parts coming!

Good Work!

Great story, like what you're doing with it. As you write more you're getting better. I'm looking forward to the next installment and have added this story line to my favorites.

On a roll

loved the twist with Dinah really looking forward to the next installment . please keep it up

looking forward to more

Read the whole series in a couple days. Great story!

You never cease to amaze me with this series, I love it. Mr.Smith is an idiot, John is gonna get him back into the ring sooner or later it's just a matter of time

Dinah's Choice?

It doesn't seem that John has considered the possibility that Dinah was under the control of someone else. If he checked for that possibility while scanning her mind, you should have made it very clear. If her actions against him were not her own choice, there should be no punishment.

Great story, and the better editing in later chapters helps.
One thing that confused me was that all previous holders of the rings were John's ancestors per the early chapters, but other holders came into the story in later episodes.
I hope you plan to write more and finish it!

Keep it up!!

I've read the whole thing - please keep it up! Excited to see what happens with the escaped father- who seems to have learned nothing from his captivity...

Coming Soon.

Sorry for the delay. My editor has been on a holiday and I have been waiting for his return. However I have been writing still. To be clear, editor has chapter 22 and I am almost finished with chapter 23. So, there are two more chapter to be released this month. Thanks for your patience.

Chapter 22 Submitted

Thanks for your patience. Chapter 22 has been submitted and should be posted in the next two days or so.

Chapter 23 is almost ready to be submitted for editing. Thanks again to you my loyal readers.

Awesome

It is awesome that you now have someone editing for you. The story flows so much better now! :D I will have to favorite you soon so I can see when chapter 24 gets posted..

A great story

I have to admit I very much enjoyed this as an actual story. Much different from any other stories I've read here. I am actually starting to care about these characters and what happens to them