All Comments on 'Tali Ch. 08'

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dinkus36dinkus36over 9 years ago

you can not leave us there!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH

it's such a beautiful story and of course so intriguing to have the lifestyle without the sex but this definitely works. I am in love with your story!

TootsallTootsallover 9 years ago
Thank You

For showing how far brainwashing can be taken. Hope to read several future chapters in this story of recovery (for both of them). Main comment left back at Chapter 1. A healthy 5* from start to...present?

getthebookgetthebookover 9 years ago
thank you

I have enjoyed each chapter but I think this is the one! Emotions and choices just stripping it all down. Incredible. Keep going, I will be waiting looking and hoping for the continuation of this story.

MiramiraMiramiraover 9 years ago
Thank you

This was beautiful, waiting for the next chapter plzzzzzzzz

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I have some questions

How old is Tali and Miro? And is Miro rich? If he is rich why he have to kidnap Tali??? And I realy want to know why Miro kidnap a human but never have sex with her? It is weird,isn't it? I hope you will answer these questions. By the way,realy love the story.:-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I wanted to like the story

I really did, it seemed like it had an interesting idea, but the execution of that idea makes me regret wasting the time i spent reading it.

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