Susan's First Invitation

From housewife to whore?

Another in those chucky series . Those who feel that turning a wife into a whore or worse is cool . Sick

1*

Erotic? Not in my world.

As I said in Part1...

As I said in part 1, she lying to her husband, then start to think more in other men and their money, will turn her in a whore...Worst than a whore...a cheating whore, no matter how they need the money. That's what happen in this part...All the story was ruined. No erotic in cheating...For instance this story being about the birthday couple going to a strip club, and have a girl there, was hot...But being like this...

It's nice to know that Susan might think of at least one husband...

Just not her own. I won't spent any more time on this non-erotic crap. I think the writing is ok in terms of structure and word usage but it seems lifeless. Perhaps that's because Susan is soulless and lifeless betrayer. One can only hope that karma works its magic and that Susan gets what she so richly deserves.

Infinite sadness...

You tell the story well but the prose seems very two-dimensional and lifeless. Susan seems to have no moral core. She's started on this, this, this... whatever it is based on lies to her husband. This isn't mutual concept it's betrayal and deception.

Yeah I know that if I don't like these themes, I shouldn't read them and I should let others whack off to their hearts' content thinking about the beauty of fractured relationships. Having suffered this kind of deceit and betrayal I can't seem to let it go. That's why I have a therapist.

Susan has given no indication of regret or remorse. She should have the integrity to get our of her marriage and fuck whomever she wants whenever she wants. From what I've observed in others who have rationalized and explored this option to help the family in crisis, the reality is that the woman will eventually hide more and more of "her" money and the family financial will go unresolved and because the woman has turned he body into a commodity any intimacy and sexual passion in the marital relationship is doomed. Face it, she fucks for money and her husband has none.

Perhaps this is the message you want to convey. In real life any other message is a lie. It's not even fantasy, it's sick woman hating obsession.

I do admire your willingness and talent to actually write and even more to take the risk in publishing. You are head and shoulders above me in that regard. And really I'm not judging you but reacting to what I see as an inevitably sad situation.

Whatever some comments say, there are wives from poor families who work as strippers and prostitutes to earn money. Often times this is because their husbands or boyfriends are too drunk/lazy/drugged up to earn money. In these cases the man is only to willing for the wife to do this work, he does not have to shift his arse. They would also receive unemployment benefit and child support, at least enough to get by. So why not let the wife do it. No need to divorce her, she brings in the money.

I liked it

and gave it 5 stars. I thought it was very erotic. I don't judge people and don't try to guess their motivation. Whatever thought that comes to one's mind may be totally wrong. Different strokes for different folks! The only thing that bothered me in the story was the reference to a "postrate" rather than to the correct "prostate". I encourage the writer to keep it up because his story helped me to do so!

Her Name Might Have Been Susan

but this ain't the same woman we met in part one.
Credibility: shot to hell.

I liked the story

I find it amazing that people read a story about topics that they know will involve sex and cheating then whine and bitch about how bad they think it is. I liked the theme and hope you write more,