homeTranssexuals & CrossdressersBrett's Transformation to BrendaPublic Comments

All Comments  for

Brett's Transformation to Brenda

bytinycuck84©
All
Comments (5)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/23/14

Good all around!

This is well written and worth another part (or however many)!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/23/14

just a beginning

amber could do so many things to/for Brenda.
please don't keep us waiting long

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/25/14

not bad

I thought your story was OK, but the poor use of punctuation marks in the dialogue distracted from it. I suggest you use one of Literoticas volunteer editors to help you clean it up next time.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/27/14

Great start!

I enjoyed it. .please continue!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/31/14

I wish

I was in his place

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Brett's Transformation to Brenda  or
More submissions by tinycuck84.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel