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find an editor
Your spelling and grammar left much to be desired. Either proof read or find an editor.
your story
Thank you for telling your story. Don't worry about your grammar, as it is possible English is not your first language. Maybe you are French speaking? It is okay. Keep writing and you will improve. Don't be bothered by anyone's silly remarks about grammar. We are very much able to understand what happened.
Great story.......
Not from an erotic point of view, but from a reality point of view. You don't say it, but it is quite conceivable that someone slipped date-rape drug, or something similar, into one of your drinks toward the end of the evening. As a man, I find this to be despicable, but I know it happens. Not knowing where you live, perhaps your silence afterward was the best thing you could do, depending on the culture. In other countries, silence is your, and every woman's, enemy. Writing about it publicly is good!
I assume this is a true story, and I'm sorry you had to experience it. I believe it is much more satisfying, as a man, if the sex is mutually consenting, and enjoyed by all partners. I believe I understand the forces at work with the gangbangers, but I can't condone it. I've spent time as a councillor with a rape crisis centre.
Good luck, and keep writing!
Rape, not my thing.
That is what were talking about here. Just plain rape. It was a decent story until the end.
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