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by Anonymous10/24/14

I Don't Know Quite What to Say

There is a lot going on in this story. And even though the main points were brought out I think you ended it much too abruptly. Yes, there was already the scene with the stripper in the computer, but I think you should have continued with the father-daughter liaison just to stretch things out a bit. Or you might have given us a bit more about what was going on with the mother. I'm just saying that it needed to be fleshed out with more details and action (pardon the pun). But you're the writer--what do I know?

Roger.

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by bhuff10/25/14

Stay tuned...

More to cum in the next chapters.

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