eeeeeeeeeuuuuuuuuw knew it was written by a guy......and a guy with serious issues and no idea how women think. ick. you need to get laid. characters have no depth, why the hell would a woman do this sort of thing....it never occurs to the author or anyone in the story to ask. abusive crap.
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Anonymous09/30/04
great
im a woman and i loved this story...i did not find it mysoginistic or overly perverse as your other critic did...maybe shes just a square...heehee...anyway keep writing that fabulous stuff so i can get off...love LadyLust
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Anonymous09/30/04
What a wonderfull world !!!
Well, i loved this story,even if this girl have some weird behavior,like drinking piss,all the rest is perfect ;)
Keep writing and keep this girl for a wonderfull sequel
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Anonymous09/30/04
Now this is porn!
Maybe mysoginist anonymous should think twice before reading a story titled Boiler Room Slut! This was great, unrelenting and daring to go places that make us uncomfortable--which is why we're here. Also well written! Keep it up
Another chick here. No, it's not all my cup of tea, but damn it's HOT and I wanted to read it! I love the kink and filth. Came twice while reading it. *wink* That means it's really good. Keep up the good work.Oh and I'm going thru and reading EVERYTHING you have written. You rock!
A moving, well-told story of a pleasant young woman getting the respect she deserves. I don't get off to everything she did, such as the piss drinking, but in the context of the story it was hot because *she* enjoyed it so much. I wouldn't have minded if it were a page longer, but it was fantastic at the length it was written.
It brought out my inner hedonist. Good job.
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Anonymous09/22/06
Great story
I have met a couple of women almost like this fictional girl, even had to back away slowly when it got a little too kinky.
Keep writing, as long as it is consensual, doesn't cause permenant harm or public humiliation, go for it.
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Anonymous12/15/06
Close....
IT was good. Really good. But the guys were a little too gross. just ugly or average guys would have been better (in my mind)
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Anonymous02/22/07
excellent
loved it,providing an imagination we can not really have in real life, such a pity she did not allow them to use all her holes at once.
how could I give something else than 100%?
I love it, there are too few authors here writing about pure anal/throat gangbangs including double anal, cum eating and piss drinking.
Your my favorite! Keep it up! I love these sluts!! (probably because I am one myself)
I'm usually not into all the extreme stuff but this story was entertaining. How does the janitor know how to find hung guys? I thought that was kinda funny. Good job though.
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Anonymous10/12/09
more info
It was good but maybe a little more info to let the imagination go wilder.
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Anonymous10/14/09
So...
I think the guys were just a TINY bit too ugly. Just ugly guys or average would be nice. But those were disgusting. I love the double penetration in the ass. I came twice while reading it! More ass, less sweat. xD Disgustingly delightful.
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Anonymous01/19/11
so sick!
your story is so delishly sick and it got me to cum so hard! I love that there's not too much extra story but still goes into detail and mentality etc
English
i like kinky....but this is misogynistic crap
eeeeeeeeeuuuuuuuuw knew it was written by a guy......and a guy with serious issues and no idea how women think. ick. you need to get laid. characters have no depth, why the hell would a woman do this sort of thing....it never occurs to the author or anyone in the story to ask. abusive crap.
great
im a woman and i loved this story...i did not find it mysoginistic or overly perverse as your other critic did...maybe shes just a square...heehee...anyway keep writing that fabulous stuff so i can get off...love LadyLust
What a wonderfull world !!!
Well, i loved this story,even if this girl have some weird behavior,like drinking piss,all the rest is perfect ;)
Keep writing and keep this girl for a wonderfull sequel
Now this is porn!
Maybe mysoginist anonymous should think twice before reading a story titled Boiler Room Slut! This was great, unrelenting and daring to go places that make us uncomfortable--which is why we're here. Also well written! Keep it up
Great story
Maybe a little too short, but still great
good story
i'm a woman, and i loved it a lot too. very dirty and kinky.
Soooo dirty
Another chick here. No, it's not all my cup of tea, but damn it's HOT and I wanted to read it! I love the kink and filth. Came twice while reading it. *wink* That means it's really good. Keep up the good work.Oh and I'm going thru and reading EVERYTHING you have written. You rock!
Greatness
A moving, well-told story of a pleasant young woman getting the respect she deserves. I don't get off to everything she did, such as the piss drinking, but in the context of the story it was hot because *she* enjoyed it so much. I wouldn't have minded if it were a page longer, but it was fantastic at the length it was written.
It brought out my inner hedonist. Good job.
Great story
I have met a couple of women almost like this fictional girl, even had to back away slowly when it got a little too kinky.
Keep writing, as long as it is consensual, doesn't cause permenant harm or public humiliation, go for it.
Close....
IT was good. Really good. But the guys were a little too gross. just ugly or average guys would have been better (in my mind)
excellent
loved it,providing an imagination we can not really have in real life, such a pity she did not allow them to use all her holes at once.
again...amazing
how could I give something else than 100%?
I love it, there are too few authors here writing about pure anal/throat gangbangs including double anal, cum eating and piss drinking.
Your my favorite! Keep it up! I love these sluts!! (probably because I am one myself)
Good story
I'm usually not into all the extreme stuff but this story was entertaining. How does the janitor know how to find hung guys? I thought that was kinda funny. Good job though.
more info
It was good but maybe a little more info to let the imagination go wilder.
So...
I think the guys were just a TINY bit too ugly. Just ugly guys or average would be nice. But those were disgusting. I love the double penetration in the ass. I came twice while reading it! More ass, less sweat. xD Disgustingly delightful.
so sick!
your story is so delishly sick and it got me to cum so hard! I love that there's not too much extra story but still goes into detail and mentality etc
well done
Wow, you really bring it on with your stories! My cock has never been as hard as it is from reading your stuff. Keep it cumming!.. er.. coming!
Wow!
That is one amazing story! You are definitely on the right track!
Keep me coming please!
Slutlover
What a great story I'm so fucking hard I'm going to jack off and eat my cum keep up the good work
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