Well-written, well-paced story. Even though it was obvious what the outcome would be from almost the beginning, it was still sexy and provocative, with just the right timing through the removal of the mask to the final and inevitable conclusion. Thank you for the enjoyable read.
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Anonymous10/26/14
Wonderfully Hot
Wow, was so erotic, as another said knew where we were headed but getting there was really hot and teasingly fun! Please please write more and more!!
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Anonymous10/27/14
nice!
nicely done!
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Anonymous10/27/14
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For some reason it reminded me of GTA 5 but it was hot!
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HOt hot
well done should have been longer keep on adding on tenbears43
Well
was she then pregnant?
Very sexy
Incredibly hot and sexy story. Please, please write more!
Very Nice!
Well-written, well-paced story. Even though it was obvious what the outcome would be from almost the beginning, it was still sexy and provocative, with just the right timing through the removal of the mask to the final and inevitable conclusion. Thank you for the enjoyable read.
Wonderfully Hot
Wow, was so erotic, as another said knew where we were headed but getting there was really hot and teasingly fun! Please please write more and more!!
nice!
nicely done!
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For some reason it reminded me of GTA 5 but it was hot!
I agree with
tenbears43
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