Family Get-together

Nice Story................

But way to short...................

More Please

I thought the whole darn family was going to get together...

time

What a waste of time.

Commenters are so annoying

Nice start to a sexy story. More perhaps? If not, I still enjoyed it. Can't say I'm into pregnant ladies, but it's good to see they enjoy cock too :)

Even if it's a strange cock ...

re: Commenters are so annoying

Well, you're a commenter, so, by your own reasoning, you're annoying.

a real good start

ignore the haters n keep going. its a potentially good story.

Re:Family Get-together

I thought that it was a nice story and I was very much like to hear more from you.

Great start... keep going.... please.

awesome!

I love sleep sex stories and mistaken identities, so I really loved this one.

Echo "Nice Story"

It was a comfortable read. Maybe too comfortable. May reflect more of the arousal and enjoyment of the characters?

Very well written!

I would have like to hear about the interaction between you and David the following day, but great story!