This story works as a first chapter to a much longer storyline, but not as well if it's a standalone story. There are simply too many open-ended questions left unanswered.
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Anonymous11/19/14
to think this
way is one thing to put it on paper and let all see what you think shows what you are worth which is nothing.
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Anonymous11/19/14
Refreshing
A great story. Refreshing in its honesty.
I don't get all those people who comment badly. She is doing what she needs to do to survive. All those disgusting comments come from guys who'd do someone like her in an instant if they had the opportunity, then condemn her for doing so. A bunch of priggish hypocrites afraid of a woman who is able to use her sexuality to her own benefit. If they don't like this type of story, what they doing looking at this site. Silly idiots.
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Anonymous11/19/14
re: anonymous-refreshing
Did you get your whining of your chest anon? What's it to you what others think? Your opinion the only one that counts? Read the story, comment on it and then shut the fuck up. Good advice for you assholes that think your opinion is the only one that counts. Didn't read the story, low scores and bad reviews usually indicate bad story.
I
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Anonymous11/19/14
gave it a 5 to help offest the ashole annony who gave it a 1
and I'll keep doing this as long as the assholes annony keep posting their shit as comments on here!
Actually it's what she wants to do and what she wants to do is stab Gerry in the back. This isn't in the "mistake" category this is planned betrayal. The protagonist is despicable and should have the integrity to break with Gerry (who she loves with all her heart- lol) and make it on her own.
She's right, she's a whore and less honest than the whores standing out on the street corner peddling their bodies to survive. I don't care that she thinks so little of herself that she's gonna give it up for Michael or even that she wants him but she should be honest about it.
I agree with you 100% that she should be able to do whatever she wants to.succeed .I have just one problem with this Why be or get married? Her marriage and this stupid wait to consumate take this from fantasy to Sci Fi.Cut Gerry loose and go be her bosses whore.Everyone wins .
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Anonymous11/19/14
So Gerry comes back and....
He says, NO THANKS to the "married sex". Having left the marriage "un-consumated" makes it easier for the annulment to go through. She thought he was "too drunk", but really it was an act, as he had already become suspicuious, since her evil nature was beginning to show through, as they got closer to the wedding, and she cut him off from sex. So sorry bitch, after doing his long distance research on her new job and boss (with the aid of some PI survelliance), he has learned that she isn't the type of woman he wants to be married to afterall. Luckily, there was a pretty swedish intern along with him on the project trip, who was more than happy to keep him warm in bed on the cold nights and help him heal his broken heart these last three months. After this brief return to settle the legalities dissolving the worst mistake and biggest error in judgemnet of his life, he will be flying out to Sweden to rejoin his true love, and claim his rightful place at her side in happiness. As is fitting, because she is already pregnant with Gerry's baby. BTW, after Mikey boy left from your bathroom tryst, Gerry reveals that he was likely to run into some problems out in the car park. Apparently his wife knows some pretty tough goons, and they were paid to show him that his wife isn't too happy with his adulturous behavior. He needs to learn a lesson, and perhaps may be even heal from it, before you both have to go out looking for NEW jobs next week. Good Luck, and Good Riddence. At least being a whore, will ALWAYS guarantee that you won't be long unemployed.
I mean really, did she expect any other sort of result????
but need a Chapt 2. What happens when Gerry gets home? Is he a willing cuck, or will he fight the good fight?
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Anonymous11/19/14
Three hands
He grabbed my hair and scrunched it up behind my head kissing me deeply on the mouth. His fingers pinched my nipples and his other hand spread my thighs.
Every woman's dream: A man with three hands...
Good story well told. Husband made his decision as to what was important and it wasn't his wife or their future.
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Anonymous11/19/14
These two lines were all I needed to know . . .
that this story is going to be about stupid pathetic people: "Gerry got drunk at the reception and passed out on the bed in our hotel room, I slept on the couch and I waved him off the following day at the airport a virgin bride." You can stop reading right there. I did.
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Anonymous11/19/14
really pathic story about pathic people.
That this shit is all in your head should worry you, please stay away from children.
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Anonymous11/19/14
Whores are replacible
There is always a newer, sexier, different whore coming down the street. So ride the money now. In year she will be out the door and husband will be gone.
Please note she could not care less about husband now anyway. In fact he really does not play a role in the story.
If husband stays home, he may lose his job. Then be a pathetic loser that she can justifiably cheat on.
If husband leaves and keeps his job and maybe a promotion then he is abandoning here and she can justifiably cheat on him
It looks like a lose-lose situation. Guess the only way to win dump the bitch on the wedding night and fuck the hot chick in the back pew.
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Anonymous11/19/14
Total Garbage
By a limey fag....................hubby finds out, does his best imitation of old Jack. Cuts the whore to ribbons and leaves her slashed body in the gutter.
in some parts of the world you dial 211 for information
the only thing I got out of this story was the accuracy of the username of the author.
yes, it was a bad idea to read this story.
the premise of the story was also a bad idea.
Sorry, I am sure you have talent as a writer, but the content of this story makes it a waste of time to read...just another cheating spouse with no consequences for her actions.
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Anonymous11/20/14
Total trash , if this is the best u can do .stop writing
A whore is born by this trashy story teller
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Anonymous11/21/14
category?
If hubby doesn't know, it's just cheating and not hot wife.
great piece. keep 'em coming.
a married woman who enjoys her sexuality is a hot wife. period.
too many want a cuckold only definition of 'loving wives' and pretend the BTB and the flings and neglected affairs et al are not part and parcel of the category.
part of the fun of these stories is how or if hubby is going to find out.
The question is not whether or not she's hot but rather if she is a wife. You may enjoy betrayal. It may trip your trigger to see others suffer. If so, that's sad and you're sadder. Yeah I know loving wives is supposed to be about women living lives at the beck and call of their crotches. That may be what drives you too. If so, why do you have opposable thumbs?
There is nothing fun in betrayal and deceit. One can only hope that you get to experience it first hand.
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Anonymous11/24/14
two stars and one was because she was going to fuck her husband with her bosses cum in her.. and since you start with one you get two... otherwise if I could vote starting with zero stars you would have gotten a one.... not a loving wife .. she's a whore nothing more.
Seems to be some sad cases here. C'mon guys, who the hell cares if she cheating? It just a story and a damn good one at that. I got a kick out of reading this story because it turned me on, and that's the whole of it.
So c'mon, just enjoy the stories and keep your self-rightious stuff to yourself. Or go to the Disney site.
Yeah,
I think things like this are written for the sole purpose of irritating the trolls and getting as many negative comments as they can.
Yeah, they get negative comments and "1" stars.
So, why feed the fool author with negative comments?
Actually
I had a client whose wife was this bride... Did the marriage last...NO... True! Cannot believe I found this one. I have to give a 5.
The only redeeming fact of this story is.....
Seems the authors moniker is at least correct.Badidea.Thats what this story was.
What a dirty slut.
loved it 4*
whores are what they are whores
may she die of painful cancer from her AIDS infection
***
This story works as a first chapter to a much longer storyline, but not as well if it's a standalone story. There are simply too many open-ended questions left unanswered.
to think this
way is one thing to put it on paper and let all see what you think shows what you are worth which is nothing.
Refreshing
A great story. Refreshing in its honesty.
I don't get all those people who comment badly. She is doing what she needs to do to survive. All those disgusting comments come from guys who'd do someone like her in an instant if they had the opportunity, then condemn her for doing so. A bunch of priggish hypocrites afraid of a woman who is able to use her sexuality to her own benefit. If they don't like this type of story, what they doing looking at this site. Silly idiots.
re: anonymous-refreshing
Did you get your whining of your chest anon? What's it to you what others think? Your opinion the only one that counts? Read the story, comment on it and then shut the fuck up. Good advice for you assholes that think your opinion is the only one that counts. Didn't read the story, low scores and bad reviews usually indicate bad story.
I
gave it a 5 to help offest the ashole annony who gave it a 1
and I'll keep doing this as long as the assholes annony keep posting their shit as comments on here!
If that's what she "has to do" she ain't much
Actually it's what she wants to do and what she wants to do is stab Gerry in the back. This isn't in the "mistake" category this is planned betrayal. The protagonist is despicable and should have the integrity to break with Gerry (who she loves with all her heart- lol) and make it on her own.
She's right, she's a whore and less honest than the whores standing out on the street corner peddling their bodies to survive. I don't care that she thinks so little of herself that she's gonna give it up for Michael or even that she wants him but she should be honest about it.
and i gave it a 1 to offset
queer cuckold loving fags like you
re Refreshing
I agree with you 100% that she should be able to do whatever she wants to.succeed .I have just one problem with this Why be or get married? Her marriage and this stupid wait to consumate take this from fantasy to Sci Fi.Cut Gerry loose and go be her bosses whore.Everyone wins .
So Gerry comes back and....
He says, NO THANKS to the "married sex". Having left the marriage "un-consumated" makes it easier for the annulment to go through. She thought he was "too drunk", but really it was an act, as he had already become suspicuious, since her evil nature was beginning to show through, as they got closer to the wedding, and she cut him off from sex. So sorry bitch, after doing his long distance research on her new job and boss (with the aid of some PI survelliance), he has learned that she isn't the type of woman he wants to be married to afterall. Luckily, there was a pretty swedish intern along with him on the project trip, who was more than happy to keep him warm in bed on the cold nights and help him heal his broken heart these last three months. After this brief return to settle the legalities dissolving the worst mistake and biggest error in judgemnet of his life, he will be flying out to Sweden to rejoin his true love, and claim his rightful place at her side in happiness. As is fitting, because she is already pregnant with Gerry's baby. BTW, after Mikey boy left from your bathroom tryst, Gerry reveals that he was likely to run into some problems out in the car park. Apparently his wife knows some pretty tough goons, and they were paid to show him that his wife isn't too happy with his adulturous behavior. He needs to learn a lesson, and perhaps may be even heal from it, before you both have to go out looking for NEW jobs next week. Good Luck, and Good Riddence. At least being a whore, will ALWAYS guarantee that you won't be long unemployed.
I mean really, did she expect any other sort of result????
Well done, fast read, moves along nicely
but need a Chapt 2. What happens when Gerry gets home? Is he a willing cuck, or will he fight the good fight?
Three hands
He grabbed my hair and scrunched it up behind my head kissing me deeply on the mouth. His fingers pinched my nipples and his other hand spread my thighs.
Every woman's dream: A man with three hands...
I liked it.
Good story well told. Husband made his decision as to what was important and it wasn't his wife or their future.
These two lines were all I needed to know . . .
that this story is going to be about stupid pathetic people: "Gerry got drunk at the reception and passed out on the bed in our hotel room, I slept on the couch and I waved him off the following day at the airport a virgin bride." You can stop reading right there. I did.
really pathic story about pathic people.
That this shit is all in your head should worry you, please stay away from children.
Whores are replacible
There is always a newer, sexier, different whore coming down the street. So ride the money now. In year she will be out the door and husband will be gone.
Please note she could not care less about husband now anyway. In fact he really does not play a role in the story.
question
If husband stays home, he may lose his job. Then be a pathetic loser that she can justifiably cheat on.
If husband leaves and keeps his job and maybe a promotion then he is abandoning here and she can justifiably cheat on him
It looks like a lose-lose situation. Guess the only way to win dump the bitch on the wedding night and fuck the hot chick in the back pew.
Total Garbage
By a limey fag....................hubby finds out, does his best imitation of old Jack. Cuts the whore to ribbons and leaves her slashed body in the gutter.
in some parts of the world you dial 211 for information
the only thing I got out of this story was the accuracy of the username of the author.
yes, it was a bad idea to read this story.
the premise of the story was also a bad idea.
She said it in the last line
She's eager to be the bosses whore.
Fucking cheating worthless cunt.
Enough said.
negative rating
Off the charts hot
Excellent... 5*. I would have liked you to draw it out a bit, but in some ways the brevity made it even better. Well done!
Waste of Time
Sorry, I am sure you have talent as a writer, but the content of this story makes it a waste of time to read...just another cheating spouse with no consequences for her actions.
Total trash , if this is the best u can do .stop writing
A whore is born by this trashy story teller
category?
If hubby doesn't know, it's just cheating and not hot wife.
for a hot wife hubby has to know?
what utter farce.
great piece. keep 'em coming.
a married woman who enjoys her sexuality is a hot wife. period.
too many want a cuckold only definition of 'loving wives' and pretend the BTB and the flings and neglected affairs et al are not part and parcel of the category.
part of the fun of these stories is how or if hubby is going to find out.
@RogueAlan Fun?
The question is not whether or not she's hot but rather if she is a wife. You may enjoy betrayal. It may trip your trigger to see others suffer. If so, that's sad and you're sadder. Yeah I know loving wives is supposed to be about women living lives at the beck and call of their crotches. That may be what drives you too. If so, why do you have opposable thumbs?
There is nothing fun in betrayal and deceit. One can only hope that you get to experience it first hand.
two stars and one was because she was going to fuck her husband with her bosses cum in her.. and since you start with one you get two... otherwise if I could vote starting with zero stars you would have gotten a one.... not a loving wife .. she's a whore nothing more.
PA
Seems to be some sad cases here. C'mon guys, who the hell cares if she cheating? It just a story and a damn good one at that. I got a kick out of reading this story because it turned me on, and that's the whole of it.
So c'mon, just enjoy the stories and keep your self-rightious stuff to yourself. Or go to the Disney site.
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