Bewitched

Predictable. Engaging. Not very erotic. Enjoyable

I enjoyed it.

Even if you might be able to see where the story is going, it's a great read. It's a story with a happy ending for both of them. Thanks for sharing it.

Saw where this was going, but still enjoyed it!

Good writing...great story...very well done!

Pretty good

Pretty good short read. Just wish the sex were a bit more detailed and involved, especially at the end.

now I wish I could have seen liz in the sexy witch costume

Nice one

And damned well done, too.
I liked the dedication as well!
73
HP

very good

it took him long enough to notice her but when he did WOW 5 stars plus

Ron cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

An enjoyable story...

with one small issue. Elspeth started out tall and wound up petite.

like it

funny loving makes you think. in my favorites. Have you thought about a follow up story about them?
in my favorites
Ron
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