Alien Flashlight Hypnotizes Women Ch. 03

my can you write SJP!!

Don't know where you come up with this, but please we want more!

Very good story! Thank you for sharing it with us!

Only in America....

I'm amazed at your "what ifs" and your knowledge of various things. You really have my interest now.

...and the plot thickens.

now granny???hot hot hot

One of my favorite authors

SusanJill, I always enjoy everything you write. I know that feedback can be elusive at times, so hopefully I am speaking for many of your readers when I express my thoughts. Keep the tales coming, and thank you.

Good Stories

I've just found your stories (been away from Lit for a long time) and love them. If you don't mind a constructive criticism, you really could make good use of a good editor to correct a few typos, punctuation errors and such that would only make them read easier. Keep up the good work.

Love it

SusanJill, It just keeps getting better and Better !!!
Lee

Wow

what a story, I do hope you have some more chapters of this in the making. There has to be much more to this exciting adventure.

The three-way to end all three-ways

Susan, you just get better and better.
I can't take much more of this.
I think I have to take a 10 minute cool-down before going to chapter 4.