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Editor needed.
The professor's name is spelled at least two different ways in this story. There are many instances of subject/verb disagreement and tense issues, which are quite distracting. I personally don't find this story believable or likely, so it's hard to get into it. You might want to run this by an editor, then republish.
Over-obsessed of herself. Your spelling, grammar, and vocab is just ughhh.. Horrible. Get a fucking editor.
Fucking horrible. I feel like you're a 12 year old writing.
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