Certainly it is well written for the little bit there is to it. When I was in college, I dated several married girls and two of them had hubby participate. Hubby would watch while I fucked his wife. Then, cute, eager wifey wanted more. After I fucked her silly, she called hubby to her front and had him kneel. Then, she ordered him to lick her clean! I was totally amazed....he did it! He buried his face in her swollen, oozing vulva and started lapping...MY SEMEN mixed with her vaginal lube. He lapped and slurped and I LOVED IT. I got another hardon just watching him. She would let him up for air and his face had this coating of slime from me and her and he would continue licking his lips when he came up. When he finished, I quickly fucked her again. She was on fire. Then she called him back again to eat her again. I was glued to the femdom scene with my girlfriend, his wife, making him submit to her perverse sexual excitement.
Thank you for all the kind comments. I did submit a story and it is in moderation right now (which is a good thing).
I don't think you'll see long chapter-driven stories from me. I am posting are too-close-to-truth events, and life rarely follows such an ordained path. The story above is real. I think that's hot enough without embellishment (of course, I was there so that's in my favor).
All that said, I hope you enjoy the ride. Maybe those who want long stories can consider these the appetizers for the main course.
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Pretty hot
Could use a swquel.
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Certainly it is well written for the little bit there is to it. When I was in college, I dated several married girls and two of them had hubby participate. Hubby would watch while I fucked his wife. Then, cute, eager wifey wanted more. After I fucked her silly, she called hubby to her front and had him kneel. Then, she ordered him to lick her clean! I was totally amazed....he did it! He buried his face in her swollen, oozing vulva and started lapping...MY SEMEN mixed with her vaginal lube. He lapped and slurped and I LOVED IT. I got another hardon just watching him. She would let him up for air and his face had this coating of slime from me and her and he would continue licking his lips when he came up. When he finished, I quickly fucked her again. She was on fire. Then she called him back again to eat her again. I was glued to the femdom scene with my girlfriend, his wife, making him submit to her perverse sexual excitement.
Nicely done.
I await your next story, Go wherever your writing mind takes you.
Nice writing style
Very hot. Look forward to reading more of your work.
I got a new one
Thank you for all the kind comments. I did submit a story and it is in moderation right now (which is a good thing).
I don't think you'll see long chapter-driven stories from me. I am posting are too-close-to-truth events, and life rarely follows such an ordained path. The story above is real. I think that's hot enough without embellishment (of course, I was there so that's in my favor).
All that said, I hope you enjoy the ride. Maybe those who want long stories can consider these the appetizers for the main course.
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