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Really have no comment
It just isn't that interesting.
*smirks a bit*
Hmmmmm.... Bet i can guess who gets caught first.... *chuckles* i'm curious to see what happens next. Keep up the good writing.
Its pretty good :)
Are they human? I'm interested in the setting - where and when is? Who bare these people they're running from and why are they so bad?
Ugh
This is horribly written
Horribly disjointed
The transitions between activities in the story are terrible. The reader feels that the swim from the bridge has put the family in immediate danger, while the author has them chilling out on the bank. Has the author ever had sex? It's a Frankenstein of a story. At only 3 parts in, I'm checking out. 👎
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Eww!!! Please not the parents I don't know them like that
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