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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/28/14

Wow

Well written, but very disturbing. It was quite a surprise twist at the end.

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by Anonymous10/30/14

Impressive

That was wickedly well done.

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by Anonymous11/02/14

Amazing

Hella story

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by ElfUndEiner11/14/14

Some M. Night Shyamalan shit right there.

I was waiting for the horror and holy shit I got it.
Excellent writing!

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by Anonymous11/20/14

wow..!!

Wonderful writing. Loved the twist in the end, and honestly, i would have loved to know what exactly happened to them...

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