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Stranded in the Rain

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/31/14

Well that was stupid

Why didn't he simply slap the bitch silly, get dressed, take the car and leave? When your characters are stupid, your story is stupid.

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by Anonymous10/31/14

Fun Story

It was a cute, short story. I liked it. It could have been a bit more detailed and longer, but only because it drew me in and got me curious. You can tell it's a good story by the way the trolls react.

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by Anonymous11/02/14

response to that was stupid...

Good grief...if he would of slapped her he would never had such a great time.
.you are the stupid one...

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by gemlesgross01/19/15

Great arousing story

Great story, direct and to the point, and yet very effective in its evocation of the situation! Thank you!

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