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Soldier's Paradise

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by tabbymidnite10/29/14

A little mission that goes wrong but then great

Thank you. Love these types of stories. makes for interesting read. Dam good detail

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by ethrv7810/31/14

need more

the only comment i would make about this story is write some more chapters to it progress there relationship maybe he chooses to stay with her maybe he takes her home with him maybe a second woman becomes involved who also breastfeeds him just for a few ideas

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by Anonymous11/03/14

Mhmm

Lovely story.. The only thing I would've love more emphasis on the creampie. 19f here and I've been playing with myself whilst reading this. Lovely job.

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by Anonymous02/07/15

needs work, good start

there were great nonerotic details that were very interesting, but it seems like you put more work into those than the actual sex. i would consider lengthening the entire piece and adding more details to both the sex scenes and the normal sections.

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