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The Doctor Will See You Now

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/02/14

Wrong Category

Not a "loving Wife" story.

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by Anonymous11/02/14

Ditto

Enough said except 1* and move it somewhere else.

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by Anonymous11/02/14

UTTER GARBAGE!!!!!!Not even worth the 1* I gave it.

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by BGunns11/02/14

Aptly named author.

A very solid one star. Just another cuck story. Needed to rate it so as to warn others.

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by EgoTrixi11/02/14

Nomen...

...est omen!

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by Anonymous11/02/14

Hot hot hot!

Funny and sexy too!

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by Anonymous11/02/14

should be in IR as fantasy

wrong category belongs in IR or fetish

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by Anonymous11/02/14

the only true

about this story is the author name, what a bunch of crap.

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by Anonymous11/02/14

Yep, No Talent...

Just a typical sicko author pretending to be able to write an erotic story. Big, big difference between erotic and "dirty." Most LW stories are just plain "dirty," as is this piece of trash.

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by threeinch11/02/14

She deserves a real cock

All Wives deserve a real cock, if Her husband's tiny thing is inadequate the husband must accept Her satisfaction by a real man.

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by Anonymous11/02/14

so this is sexy?

hell make it really sexy
have her castrate pussy boy by pulling them off
then too really show love have them cut off his dick and let him bleed out
no anybody that likes this crape needs to get help

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by Anonymous11/02/14

Pointless

How is it that all these writers write about guys that are wimps and take this shit from their wives or girlfriends. Are their no more real men to write about.

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by Anonymous11/02/14

Dictatorship supporter

@ threeinch Is it obligatory to live together in marriage according to you? The tiny cock husdband MUST NOT divorce according to you. Would you ban the divorce if you were dictator in a dictatorship? In the Nazi Germany Himmler planned to ban the divorce!!!!!!!

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by Anonymous11/02/14

wrong setting dude

this is Bondage setting not wiffie setting pure and simple.

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by Anonymous11/02/14

yikes.

I am sure no talent that wrote this has a tiny cock.but that makes this pathic not erotic, creepy perverts on here.

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by Anonymous11/02/14

1*

New daily baboon ..........

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by swingerjoe11/02/14

Why?

Why on earth did you put this story in this section? Do you like the abuse? Oh, wait.

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by Anonymous11/02/14

no talent

fitting name

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by Anonymous11/02/14

gee the dr is out now

You ask what happened. He tried the same shit on a different couple. seems when he left the 5th floor window. That he wasn't superman after all and really couldn't fly. When his 4 ft tall body was viewed in his coffin. Yeah Hitting head first does tend to knowck off a ft or so of height. It was determined he committed suicide to keep from getting thrown in jail for rape and other charges. And you ask what drove him to take a leap out his 5th floor window. Well that scrawny lil white guy tossed his ass through it when he suggested he watch him fuck his wife. as for her She is very happy with her white husbands 5 inch cock and his 12 inch didlo. Seems as if the good Dr wasn't cut out to treat white folks after all. Oh well he did have a nice funeral although only his mother showed up.

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by Anonymous11/02/14

Fantastic! We have another sicko who gets off on humiliation. Yay for more fucked up sickos!

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by Anonymous11/02/14

WTF

Which I could give this a 0

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by Anonymous11/02/14

Wrong category

Should be fetish.

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by Anonymous11/02/14

Another stupid story!

Aren't there ANY normal authors out there?

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by Anonymous11/02/14

Truthful at least

Your "nom de plume" is in fact, highly accurate....you definitely have NO TALENT. Perhaps you could come up with something vaguely resembling a story before demonstrating your lack of talent in future

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by rightbank11/03/14

too silly to be

Not LW
Not Romance
Not erotic anything
closest category would be BDSM with a splash of IR and humiliation thrown in.
this may be an attempt to get the lowest overall score of all time.

should have stopped when I saw the authors user name.

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by MrReasonable11/03/14

not even believable

even if you are dumb and stoned

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by OOAA11/03/14

Good story!!!!

Maybe in fetish or BSDM better than Loving Wives category, but excellent story! ;)

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by impo_5811/04/14

Why?

Why did she need a doctor to tell her things, when she already had the husband caged? So this story looses all the line-up...

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by Anonymous11/08/14

no talent

a fitting name

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by devilspy11/12/14

Cuckold

Should have made cuckold suck the Dr's cock, then help put his cock in his wife's tight married pussy. Then clean cock and her pussy. Then maybe make cuckold suck his cock and swallow the second load.

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