All Comments on 'Father's Birthday Ch. 02'

I think you need a proof reader but other than that its coming along nicely,minus the drunk dad.

Well that escalated quickly - - one minute your dad’s making you pancakes, and the next your strapped to a dungeon table!

why are ameericans so unaware of the concept of head movements to signify yes & no? you always say that someone shakes their head yes, or shakes their head no, when the rest of the english speaking world knows that a head shake, from side to side means no & you nod your head, up & down or backwards & forwards to indicate yes.

like another comment, you need to proof read your work before posting, another flaw americans seem to share, like the differrence between 'to' & 'too' for example.