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Fucking Mrs. Ava Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Epiphany_Jones10/28/14

Looks like the neighborhood had a new MILF slut.

Looking forward the next chapter.

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by STARBLACK10/28/14

great

son father and son share mom now? great later son can share mom with friends then Sue and Ava double team the pastor and his wife

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by boaman00710/28/14

excellent

Loved all 3 parts so far and can't wait for the next one. Great writing. Great story development.

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by Anonymous10/29/14

A bit far fetched

I used to be one of those church assholes, but woke up :)
I thought this a bit silly that dad double teamed with his son, but hey, it's fantasy! Overall all, fucking HOT and I love the idea of the church bitch getting fucked!

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Part 4

has been submitted and is awaiting approval. Sorry for the time it took to finish it and get it turned in but I hope it is enjoyed. You all are wonderful and I thank you for the votes and emails, you make it enjoyable to write!

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by Anonymous11/01/14

so hot

Im so wet i want the whole family to have their way with me

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by chytown11/02/14

What A Nasty Story****

With some HOT SEX!!!!!!! Thanks for sharing.

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by Anonymous12/16/14

terrible story

Gosh, this story has no imagination, and horrible plot. No realism at all. No working up to sex, and this is simply a horrible story. Don't waste your time or ours!

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Ironic...

That someone could be so judgemental of someone's story and yet have to remain anonymous with each critique. I haven't wasted anyone's time since I can't make anyone read my stories. If you weren't such a coward then perhaps your opinions could have been discussed but I digress, you must know it all and be a phenomenal writer yourself. Thanks for the input.

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by Privatejinx02/13/15

First i enjoy your story.
69 on the stairs though? doesnt seem like a realistic endeavor.
And they both left ava tied up unless i just missed the father taking back his tie..

Still likelifelike it either way.

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