I look forward to reading more.
Curiouser and curiouser...
Intriguing first effort.
More please!
I'll say you did a outstanding job on your first chapter. You really drew me in, and now i have to know who this mystery guy is. More please.
A very interesting story. Can't wait until the new update.
I can't wait to see what comes next!
On to the next chapter;)
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great start!
I look forward to reading more.
Curiouser and curiouser...
Interesting
Intriguing first effort.
More please!
This is intriguing
I'll say you did a outstanding job on your first chapter. You really drew me in, and now i have to know who this mystery guy is. More please.
intriguing
A very interesting story. Can't wait until the new update.
Next installment?
I can't wait to see what comes next!
sounds appealing!!
On to the next chapter;)
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