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VERRRY Slow
You might want to consider speeding up the story it's moving pretty slow.
Awesome!
Dont listen to all the negative comments. Those couples on here that love exhibitionism like us appreciate this story. We too post REAL stories. The detail is the best part. Keep up the great work and ignore the negative comments!
Nothing better than the real thing
I am really enjoying your stories. The pace of the story is fine. I just want more more more!
Shelli and I have also had little showing experiences, but not as bold as yours. You're both my heroes.
Thanks for writing. Please continue.
Nolaguy58.
Nicely Done!
I am loving the build-up of each story and how you are describing the story from both Edward and Susan's point of view. Can't wait to see what happens next!
BTW, my wife and I are at the same point in our relationship. We are both in our mid-fifties and are looking for ways to spice things up! This story series is inspiring.
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