and i love both susan and edward. exhibitionism like this, that feeds passion BETWEEN the partners is wonderful and, frankly, I'm jealous. If it goes beyond the couple enjoying teasing others and pleasing each other, as so many of these stories do, I will be disappointed.
Does exhibitionism always have to lead to multiple partners for the wife? If so it's sad.
The narrative is compelling and easy to read. It easily commands the willing suspension of disbelief and the reader gets the sense of being right there. I have nothing more to contribute on that score.
I really want this couple to grow and succeed. Thanks for this. If and when they step over the line I'll probably be less thankful but the story is yours to tell and the characters are yours to portray. 5*
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Anonymous11/05/14
I love this series
I love this story series. Each is not to long and describes perfectly very hot scenes. Seems real believable.
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I love this series...
and i love both susan and edward. exhibitionism like this, that feeds passion BETWEEN the partners is wonderful and, frankly, I'm jealous. If it goes beyond the couple enjoying teasing others and pleasing each other, as so many of these stories do, I will be disappointed.
Does exhibitionism always have to lead to multiple partners for the wife? If so it's sad.
The narrative is compelling and easy to read. It easily commands the willing suspension of disbelief and the reader gets the sense of being right there. I have nothing more to contribute on that score.
I really want this couple to grow and succeed. Thanks for this. If and when they step over the line I'll probably be less thankful but the story is yours to tell and the characters are yours to portray. 5*
I love this series
I love this story series. Each is not to long and describes perfectly very hot scenes. Seems real believable.
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