by Alex De Kok
I love this stories, where there is no cheating.
The only 'but' for me is that they are so short.
Keep on writting and thanks
I like them short (and long, too) where one can just picture the scene and let the memories flood back. Well, I don't really have any nude beach memories 'cause I didn't know of any in my youth or even later or where they might be when I was single (my wife would never consent). But there were many nude outings at lakes and streams, and they were among the best events of my life, and I couldn't help but recall as I read this story. Oh, yes, I also missed (or did I) the nipples hard as pebbles from the author's earlier stories. You have progressed so much in your imagery in the 3 years time that these stories were written. But the variety is still there, and it makes each one "like new." I don't mind, you understand, that there are a couple of things that maybe need a rest although they make the stories easier to tell and that's the fact that most of the main characters have a deceased mate (and secondary characters are divorced) and that they seem to have a pool. I don't complain because they add a bit of realism to the story and would not be noticeable if I were not reading each story in chronological sequence. I'm now into 2003 after starting in 2000, so I have at least 8 more years, hopefully more, to go. Lots of enjoyment to go! Oh, and by the way, I like how you write from a woman's perspective sometimes and other times from the man's.
i love your story's i have read so far but you could go on with a lot of them the endings are wide open.
As I read along, I was thinking about how strange it was that naked men and women are on the beach intermingling without too much sexual arousal, but seeing a woman undressing to just her panties and bra, or sexy lingerie, would cause an instant boner. Guess it's the mystery of what is beneath the wrappings. Anyway, that's my 2 cents for whatever it's worth.
Good short story with some hot sex in it. Thanks