Just another tawdry encourage wifey to fuck others while you beat your meat cuck story in the offing. Ed I take back the nice stuff I sai last chapter. Your story (and I hope this part is fiction) has become base and common and terribly cliche. Yawn
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Anonymous11/07/14
methinks this should be in fetish, the hubby is obviously obsessed with his wifes tits and seems to think the rest of the world is too, perhaps the author has never been on holiday and seen how taken for granted it is for ladies to sunbathe topless,he comes across as perhaps being a 14 year old boy who creams his pants at the site of a womans breasts,,
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Anonymous11/09/14
Looks like a marriage headed for trouble
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Anonymous12/11/14
please continue!
I am really enjoying this series. Really looking forward to seeing it continue! Ignore the detractors, the story was just getting real hot!
really?
The husband wants a cheating little slut so he can watch and jack off, stupid story.
And now I don't care
Just another tawdry encourage wifey to fuck others while you beat your meat cuck story in the offing. Ed I take back the nice stuff I sai last chapter. Your story (and I hope this part is fiction) has become base and common and terribly cliche. Yawn
methinks this should be in fetish, the hubby is obviously obsessed with his wifes tits and seems to think the rest of the world is too, perhaps the author has never been on holiday and seen how taken for granted it is for ladies to sunbathe topless,he comes across as perhaps being a 14 year old boy who creams his pants at the site of a womans breasts,,
Looks like a marriage headed for trouble
please continue!
I am really enjoying this series. Really looking forward to seeing it continue! Ignore the detractors, the story was just getting real hot!
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