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The Taming of a Slave Pt. 04

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by Anonymous10/28/14

I like this story and look forward to reading more... I do wish the chapters were longer though!

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by Anonymous10/28/14

I agree I love the story. Love where the stories going. Wishing the Chapters were longer. Can't wait to read your next one. Great Job. Keep it up..

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by Anonymous03/24/15

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You needed to put more back story on the mother and father. Why and how are they different/special from your own parents or your past teachers . whenever I have to think back on them a happy thought should be in that place.

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