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Confusing. You can't be hypnotized into doing something you don't want to or can't.
And if you can, then why is she angry with her pet when it was the son who sent her over there in the first Place?And if Lonnie is guilty of rape and adultery, then she is equally guilty of so much more? So they hold each other in check.
As for the sex, you've made it boring. By making her so submissive and unable to say "No!", you've just made a robot and like all toys they aren't used for long before being discarded.
So it could have been good but instead you killed it.
reply to Whackdoodle
Whackdoodle, THANKS for your feedback.
You bring up a good point about the apparent contradiction in Dr. Morgan's response to Jeanette. Part of this is because I had this scene in the original version of the story in which it's Jeanette's idea and she does it of her own will. That too seemed inconsistent with Jeanette's passive character, but I liked the scene too much to cut it, so I left it in and added Mark's influence.
This is referenced by Dr. Morgan calling Mark a little shit and vowing to deal with him later. Her anger seems misplaced, but, as the rest of the story shows, she's a woman who loves control and has anger issues. She's not going to tolerate such an affront, even from a hypnotized patient.
The fact that it's her fault for having given Mark the 'key' wouldn't make such a person any less angry. She's a bit narcissistic and can't fully blame herself. These are flawed characters who don't always make sense. Kind of like real people.
As for the charge that I made it 'boring' by not allowing Jeanette to resist. One man's boredom is another man's fantasy. :-)
THANKS again for your feedback. I appreciate it even if I don't completely agree.
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