I thought my own stories were hot, but your series is exceptional. Nice pacing, good buildup of anticipation, I would only ask for a slightly more detailed overall description of the mother and daughter's bodies. But really, you've done very well. Looking forward to more.
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Anonymous10/31/14
Great Job
I have really enjoyed this series. I wish you would have let the part with his sister play out a little more before his mom came in, because the parts where he is pretending to sleep are my favorite. But other than that, another fantastic addition to the story. You are quickly becoming one of my favorite authors, keep up the great work.
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Anonymous11/01/14
Johnny is a very lucky boy
He's got both the family cunts, his mother's cunt and his kid sister's cunt, at his disposal whenever he feels the urge to blow his balls, which is all the time. Johnny's also very lucky, because the family females are just as hot for what the big strong family male's got between his legs as he is for the lovely holes between their legs--his baby sister's sweet little slice and his mother's warm wet twat. The boy's big hard cock is the center of this family dynamic. Mom and sis practically fucking worship it. As his mother tells him, "Who would have ever thought my own son's cock could feel so good?" Lucky for them too, that John's young balls never quit, they're always filled to the brim with his creamy semen, which this generous guy's always willing to shoot up all the holes his mom and sis have got, their mouths, their assholes, and especially their cunts. Family love is a wonderful thing.
A great conclusion to a well thought out and written story. Glad Sis got involved with Mom and Brother. It was very hot and got me so hard while reading it! Thanks!
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Anonymous03/16/15
lovely
I thoroughly enjoyed it, thank you!
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Anonymous04/05/15
Missing name
Loved the story, but what's the sisters name. Through the whole it was sis this and sis that. Even your pet dog has a name.
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Anonymous06/04/15
Hot
Loved the story but it would have been better had you used character name instead of bro sis and mom and needed proof read
.."Yea..." I let her run her hands over me, giving her face a mesmerized look. Then she suddenly snapped back to reality and pulled her hand away.
"Well, if you ladies are done molesting me I think I'll head out," I joked.
"Yea, whatever." Sis snarled, turning her back on me again.
@@@ should have kissed sis on the back of her neck before you walked off and told her you loved her, she would have been tubbing her pussy before you made it to the stairs. @@@
Leaving me on the couch, suffering from a bad case of blue balls.
@@@ lol, no such thing! ...but I wont get into that today, heh. @@@
She rolled off me just after I finished, white fluid trickling out from her pussy. Mom laid down beside her, rubbing her shoulders.
@@@ I thought only guys rolled off right after, lol. Tacky! I almost always stay in and cuddle till it goes down, or I start cramping from holding my full weight off out of habit, heh @@@
It was quite the view. I felt myself quickly approaching orgasm. Pumping my cock into my sisters ass while she ate out my mother proved too much for me to handle. I lasted only seconds more, finishing quicker than I had in years.
@@@ I think if I was fucking my sisters virgin ass I would squeeze the base till the urge passed, Id want to fuck that ass for a good long time! ;) @@@
Love this series of stories. My only quibble would be the scene where the mother confronts the sister seemed rushed. Would have been nice to have a few nights of the sister taking advantage. Then they would both take advantage together before revealing the son was awake the whole time. Other than that the story was great! Write more, you have talent for it!
I agree.. a few more nights of sex with sister with sister not knowing he was pretending to be asleep would have made the surprise that much sweeter. Particularly on the one night sister was horny from not having sex all weekend, and then BANG... SURPRISE!... it would have made her tears that much more believable. But her horniness making her acquiesce to the situation nonetheless, when her mother encouraged her to continue having sex with her brother.
Great story/series.... I wish more "incest" authors could write stories this well and this this much imagination throughout the story!
English
Amazingly hot series
I thought my own stories were hot, but your series is exceptional. Nice pacing, good buildup of anticipation, I would only ask for a slightly more detailed overall description of the mother and daughter's bodies. But really, you've done very well. Looking forward to more.
Great Job
I have really enjoyed this series. I wish you would have let the part with his sister play out a little more before his mom came in, because the parts where he is pretending to sleep are my favorite. But other than that, another fantastic addition to the story. You are quickly becoming one of my favorite authors, keep up the great work.
Johnny is a very lucky boy
He's got both the family cunts, his mother's cunt and his kid sister's cunt, at his disposal whenever he feels the urge to blow his balls, which is all the time. Johnny's also very lucky, because the family females are just as hot for what the big strong family male's got between his legs as he is for the lovely holes between their legs--his baby sister's sweet little slice and his mother's warm wet twat. The boy's big hard cock is the center of this family dynamic. Mom and sis practically fucking worship it. As his mother tells him, "Who would have ever thought my own son's cock could feel so good?" Lucky for them too, that John's young balls never quit, they're always filled to the brim with his creamy semen, which this generous guy's always willing to shoot up all the holes his mom and sis have got, their mouths, their assholes, and especially their cunts. Family love is a wonderful thing.
Loved it. Every story in the series was a 5*++ story!
Just awesome
Loved this series, you have a great talent for painting a picture!
yeah.that was hott
that story was hot
Finally
A great conclusion to a well thought out and written story. Glad Sis got involved with Mom and Brother. It was very hot and got me so hard while reading it! Thanks!
lovely
I thoroughly enjoyed it, thank you!
Missing name
Loved the story, but what's the sisters name. Through the whole it was sis this and sis that. Even your pet dog has a name.
Hot
Loved the story but it would have been better had you used character name instead of bro sis and mom and needed proof read
.."Yea..." I let her run her hands over me, giving her face a mesmerized look. Then she suddenly snapped back to reality and pulled her hand away.
"Well, if you ladies are done molesting me I think I'll head out," I joked.
"Yea, whatever." Sis snarled, turning her back on me again.
@@@ should have kissed sis on the back of her neck before you walked off and told her you loved her, she would have been tubbing her pussy before you made it to the stairs. @@@
Leaving me on the couch, suffering from a bad case of blue balls.
@@@ lol, no such thing! ...but I wont get into that today, heh. @@@
She rolled off me just after I finished, white fluid trickling out from her pussy. Mom laid down beside her, rubbing her shoulders.
@@@ I thought only guys rolled off right after, lol. Tacky! I almost always stay in and cuddle till it goes down, or I start cramping from holding my full weight off out of habit, heh @@@
It was quite the view. I felt myself quickly approaching orgasm. Pumping my cock into my sisters ass while she ate out my mother proved too much for me to handle. I lasted only seconds more, finishing quicker than I had in years.
@@@ I think if I was fucking my sisters virgin ass I would squeeze the base till the urge passed, Id want to fuck that ass for a good long time! ;) @@@
That was actually really enjoyable!
Still puzzled
What does @@@ mean?
Very hot series, going to empty my balls now.
Seemed rushed
Love this series of stories. My only quibble would be the scene where the mother confronts the sister seemed rushed. Would have been nice to have a few nights of the sister taking advantage. Then they would both take advantage together before revealing the son was awake the whole time. Other than that the story was great! Write more, you have talent for it!
Hot Fantasy.
Good hot fantasy far away from reality but very entertaining story.
I agree.. a few more nights of sex with sister with sister not knowing he was pretending to be asleep would have made the surprise that much sweeter. Particularly on the one night sister was horny from not having sex all weekend, and then BANG... SURPRISE!... it would have made her tears that much more believable. But her horniness making her acquiesce to the situation nonetheless, when her mother encouraged her to continue having sex with her brother.
Great story/series.... I wish more "incest" authors could write stories this well and this this much imagination throughout the story!
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