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Life of Greg

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/30/14

this story did not make sense

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by Anonymous10/31/14

Maybe

it could be a good start depending on what comes next. Potential to be a great plot line. You do need more dialog between people to make the story more interesting. Waiting to see what comes from chapter 2.

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by BrendaNW11/01/14

Good so far..

Please continue , you are doing fine so far..

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by RebeccaCherie11/08/14

Well done.

Like it so far honey xxxxxx

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