All Comments on 'It’s a Brave New World Ch. 03'

You need somebody to do some housekeeping. You've got a good story going. Plot, characters, sex, so far seem well thought out.

That said, there are a few spots where the wrong words are used and some small grammatical errors. Basically, stuff that another person would've helped to catch.

Good job though. 4 ****'s!

Awesome, keep the chapters coming.

I'm really enjoying your work. 5 stars! Keep it coming!

There's so much more to it than "feels good". You did a great job of describing love blossoming. Too much on this site describes hate-making rather than love-making.

This is an outstanding story. Please dont give up on it like so many other new writers do. One of the few stories I keep checking for a new chapter.

Great story so far!

i just really hope third parties (of either gender) don't crop up for quick conflict...

Other stories may have kinkier sex but none have better characters. Thoroughly entertaining!