Why on earth should this not end well? All three characters have the same end point in mind. The only question is how it comes about.
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Anonymous10/31/14
Tightly Written, Controlled Tension and Rising Eroticism!
Nothing overtly sexual happened, other than the other passenger wanking off and the marital sex scene when she got home. However, this was a very, very erotic story.
The writer choose to include the reader in the creative process, by hinting at what she did as a teenager and also hinting at what was coming, but not yet giving anything away. This is a powerful way to narrate a sexually oriented piece.
The fact that both the wife and the husband fantasized about her fucking the old man harbors well for additional chapters. I can even see a “prequel” or two! God it was so, so sexy because the wife has already mentally surrendered to the old man, she is now pretty much his whore.
On a personal level this was hot for my wife and I because she is a mild exhibitionist and mild public sex enthusiast. She read this story and immediately identified with the girl, started creating fantasies, and got us hot. We lived in Boston for a year she used to intentionally ride the subway at rush hour to revel in that “squashed together” experience with other men. She would try to show some cleavage and wear Lycra Spandex tights commuting back and forth to the university.
She is sexy and knew how to attract the one white collar “perv” in the crowd. She found that putting on fresh lipstick or perfume right in the crowded subway car would attract someone. Eye contact was also very important. She loved having her breasts and even camel toe massaged through the fabric. Usually some man would rub her camel toe and give her a orgasm once a week or so.
If she didn´t get ground on or felt up daily she was disappointed and uninterested in sex at home. She usually brought home a load of cum on her lycra tights a couple of times a week, and on those days she came home a fucked me like a fox. She would scrape the cum off her, put it in a lock top jar and save it in the refrigerator...now that is a very, very weird thing to do! At first that was hard for me, but then her sexual excitement took over and I grew to accept it.
This is a very, very specific fetish and the psychology of it was clearly detailed in this short story. Public exhibitionism goes hand in hand with the submissive personality type.
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A nice, well rounded story.
Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us. Five stars.
hopefully the old man won't give her flees.
This won't end well.
Won't end well ?
Why on earth should this not end well? All three characters have the same end point in mind. The only question is how it comes about.
Tightly Written, Controlled Tension and Rising Eroticism!
Nothing overtly sexual happened, other than the other passenger wanking off and the marital sex scene when she got home. However, this was a very, very erotic story.
The writer choose to include the reader in the creative process, by hinting at what she did as a teenager and also hinting at what was coming, but not yet giving anything away. This is a powerful way to narrate a sexually oriented piece.
The fact that both the wife and the husband fantasized about her fucking the old man harbors well for additional chapters. I can even see a “prequel” or two! God it was so, so sexy because the wife has already mentally surrendered to the old man, she is now pretty much his whore.
On a personal level this was hot for my wife and I because she is a mild exhibitionist and mild public sex enthusiast. She read this story and immediately identified with the girl, started creating fantasies, and got us hot. We lived in Boston for a year she used to intentionally ride the subway at rush hour to revel in that “squashed together” experience with other men. She would try to show some cleavage and wear Lycra Spandex tights commuting back and forth to the university.
She is sexy and knew how to attract the one white collar “perv” in the crowd. She found that putting on fresh lipstick or perfume right in the crowded subway car would attract someone. Eye contact was also very important. She loved having her breasts and even camel toe massaged through the fabric. Usually some man would rub her camel toe and give her a orgasm once a week or so.
If she didn´t get ground on or felt up daily she was disappointed and uninterested in sex at home. She usually brought home a load of cum on her lycra tights a couple of times a week, and on those days she came home a fucked me like a fox. She would scrape the cum off her, put it in a lock top jar and save it in the refrigerator...now that is a very, very weird thing to do! At first that was hard for me, but then her sexual excitement took over and I grew to accept it.
This is a very, very specific fetish and the psychology of it was clearly detailed in this short story. Public exhibitionism goes hand in hand with the submissive personality type.
Thanks and keep writing!
I hope the story continues
Well written!
I hope there's more to this. I'd hate to think that they didn't meet up again.
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