Your stories (so far) have a preference for rough sex, which is fine but too much or too harsh won't resound with folks (me being one). If you are going to write along the path that these are MONSTER girls, this would have made a good introduction for a longer story, because if you are 'quoting' from the Monster Girl Encyclopedia you have to remember that the "M.G."s do have/develop feelings for their mates.
P.S. The attitude the Minotaur had was more akin to what the Orge in the previous story would've had if she won.
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Anonymous02/18/16
short but good
pretty good story despite how short it is. I'd like to see more
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Not as good as your previous :/
Your stories (so far) have a preference for rough sex, which is fine but too much or too harsh won't resound with folks (me being one). If you are going to write along the path that these are MONSTER girls, this would have made a good introduction for a longer story, because if you are 'quoting' from the Monster Girl Encyclopedia you have to remember that the "M.G."s do have/develop feelings for their mates.
P.S. The attitude the Minotaur had was more akin to what the Orge in the previous story would've had if she won.
short but good
pretty good story despite how short it is. I'd like to see more
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