The Taming of a Slave Pt. 06

Another great chapter. *smiles* i'm looking forward to what happens next. And looking forward to what is happening with Marsha and Joseph.

Wow. This is the first chapter I've read but I like her.

Too many authors associate force and violence with strength. Sure violence and a use can break a dog; but then it will be good for nothing OR it can make the dog so mean that the moment your back is turned it will gnaw off its own paws to attack you even if it means its death.

Your antagonist is smart enough to know the difference and I'm very impressed.

Similarities to TRS?

Anyone else notice how close this story is to hispets rebellious slave?

Great!

I agree with the anonymous below. It is rather like TRS, however I love it! Loving the story so far, would like to see it get a bit longer still, 2 or 3 pages maybe? Otherwise I feel it breaks up the momentum you've got going, if that makes sense. Really enjoying Amaris and her attitude. Cannot wait for ch 7!

TRS like, sure but I'm game!

Sure the storyline may be like TRS...and the author name similar, but the writing isn't on the same level. I like this story; I would love to see richer, more developed writing. This is a bit choppy. The transitions are abrupt. The characters could use more development, too. But, it is interesting and we've read this far. Practice makes perfect!!! AND...really, it's not as if that story was the first "captured/sold" story ever!!! (And pussy power secret project?? hahahaha! Who doesnt want to see THAT in action?! ) Plus...TRS isn't finished; perhaps this will be. Hopefully, it doesn't parallel TRS too closely! It takes bravery to post a story and bravery to read comments. Kudos!