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The Laptop Surprise of My Mom Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by ali500mph10/31/14

Well awaited comback!

Thank you for continuing this! Do have some incest elements, but the main thing isin't about the son having sex with his mother, but should be the son using his mother's body for benefits, watching her getting used, etc.

Do Continue!

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by doug_nought10/31/14

Why would the son want...

...to have sex with his STD ridden skank of a mother?

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by Anonymous10/31/14

deja vu

this is recycled from a couple of years ago.

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by Anonymous11/01/14

Please make the son jealous or angry

That would be so cool

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by Anonymous11/03/14

Great keep going!!!

Great, Please keep going would like to see more detail as conversation between characters description of the scene and clothing. Would like to see the son confront the mother about the videos and find out more about how far is the extent of her new life. Also would like to see the son involve in her new life. Keep it up and looking forward to read what happens next!

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by rightbank11/20/14

was not worth the wait

If this is to continue, someone needs to find out who these predators are and give them the reward they have earned.

and dear old mom needs to visit the nearest health clinic ASAP!

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by rightbank11/20/14

btw: if reading about, or watching a video of his mother

constitutes "elements" of incest, does reading or dreaming about money make me a millionaire?

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by TheRiseFromAshes11/20/14

Incest/no incest

Hi Rightbank,

I'll address your second point first. Using the word that you've used earlier on my story, I think you're a little naive yourself to think that there aren't different shades of incest that exist on Literotica. There are subtle and more obvious types out there.

The rules on Literotica have it that if one or more characters blatantly 'enjoy' themselves over watching someone who they are related to, the story needs to be categorized as such. Therefore, the first and third stories, in which you've read so far, are NOT classified as such - they are classified as 'mature', although they could be placed under 'fetish' too. Mature was meant to advertise that it was a story involving a MILF.

You'd be kidding yourself if things found on Literotica represent what often 'actually' happen in real life. A lot of it doesn't happen.

The first point - I wanted to make the reader decide early whether the men were genuine or if they were tricking her for their own purposes. Either way, there was no wrong answer to that. They could very well be interpreted as both.

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by JessiWilske12/09/14

As Chapter 1. Same judgment. Well written.

As Chapter 1. Same judgment.
Possible merger with chapter 1.
Not really differentiation

Well written, smooth, fast, oriented pure sex, perhaps too fast.
Few emotional complications We will see the following.
Possible more details and details on the role of each of the male characters-

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