All Comments on 'On the Bus: Excuse Me'

by Tara Cox

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wrong site

Why is this on literotica?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Not bad!

Was a not a bad story but I would suggest publishing it under nonerotic

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Lovely

I enjoyed the sweetness of the story, surprised and actually glad that it wasn't Erotic. It seemed exactly as it should be.

But I'm curious about it being categorized as a chain story, written as a collaboration between authors, but there's no reference to who all the authors are.

AA82ndAAAA82ndAAabout 1 year ago

I liked the presentation. The theme is not new however, the track of the story made it interesting. Speculation: Will she stray at 40 or so? Is this just wedding nerves or doubt that she can experience only one man?

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