I am speechless how wonderful...love it,love it,love it,LOL
i wish i could find a man who would see that i need that sort of treatment,and give it to me.thanks,MM,for a story where 40's not too old.me
Perfect! I would love to read more!
A simple spanking but so sexy. I long to have someone to punish me for my naughty behaviour.
I don't know why you put parentheses around all of the non-dialogue descriptions, but it's very distracting. Otherwise, it's a well-written story.
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I am speechless how wonderful...love it,love it,love it,LOL
wow,it's never too late.
i wish i could find a man who would see that i need that sort of treatment,and give it to me.thanks,MM,for a story where 40's not too old.me
thank you
Perfect! I would love to read more!
Yes please!
A simple spanking but so sexy. I long to have someone to punish me for my naughty behaviour.
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I don't know why you put parentheses around all of the non-dialogue descriptions, but it's very distracting. Otherwise, it's a well-written story.
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