homeNon-Erotic PoetryThe Stone DemonPublic Comments

All Comments  for

The Stone Demon

byOldbear63©
All
Comments (3)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by pelegrino11/02/14

Very eerie, catches completely the mood you want to create.
I liked all images you give, crows flying uneasy, horses frozen etc, also the references to magic number 7.
And finally the abrupt" non end" is a masterstroke.
I hope you are well and had a nice Halloween.
5ed.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by saucymh11/04/14

That's brilliant!

Very entertaining. The poem is atmospheric and mysterious then cracked me up at the end. Great fun!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Trixareforkids11/11/14

Oh what creepy fun

Nicely done.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to The Stone Demon  or
More submissions by Oldbear63.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel