Ender27, who provided much of the storyline, outlined some possibilities and I devised others. I chose to skip the multiple-outcomes quandary and leave it ambiguous. But what *could* happen next?
* Nobody opens the box. The guys pass out. Grace makes her escape, either scooting back home, or heading into Benito's bed, very horny.
* Before Benito arrives, Grace hears comments about what a cheating pussy hound he is and would always be. She decides to fuck everyone there in revenge -- with Benito watching, humiliated or not.
* Drunken Benny takes the challenge and pokes his cock into the box, first in Grace's mouth and then in her anus. He's likely too drunk to do a good job.
* Maybe the real stripper-hooker finally arrives. "Then who is in the box?"
* Benny opens the box. Grace is revealed. Benny either 1) goes ballistic and kicks her out, 2) is shocked and helps her to safety, or 3) laughs and offers her to all his buddies. Orgy time!
* Benny opens the box and is delighted. "This is the best XMas present ever!" he cries. "We've got to do this every year from now on!"
No, I am not going to write those or any other endings, but you are welcome to try. Have fun!
A naked girl in a box with holes in it: who wouldn't have an immediate anticipation of what comes next ?
You set a nice scene, then put the innocent damsel in classic distress. Very fun.
The only thing that put me off - and this is not the author's fault - is it was odd with how the page cut off: you have to go to page 2, anticipating something more, to find out the story was over on page 1.
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Anonymous11/11/14
Disappointing
Liked it a lot until the end, then lost all my enthusiasm.
Enjoyed the story immensely. As Hypoxia says, future possibilities are legion and intriguing. Thank you
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Anonymous12/11/14
Lame
You seem to nothing about human anatomy. Not only would a female body not be positioned correctly in a tight space, these men must all have freakishly long fingers and cocks for this kind of action. Unless this was meant to be satire?
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Anonymous12/12/14
Shocking!
I'm sorry but I'm shocked at myself for how much I LOVED this story. I would have loved to be the bride in the box, but I'd never have the guts to go through with it.
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Anonymous12/12/14
Story Comparison
Read this entry and "Accidental Gangbang" by silkstockingslover. While I enjoyed this story, ssl's take is a more fleshed out one. It gets my vote.
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Anonymous12/25/14
And?????
I really liked this, but so want to know what happens next.
This is truly a story about being careful what you wish for. Well written. Feel very sorry for the young woman who had saved herself only to get gangbanged.
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AUTHOR'S COMMENT:
Ender27, who provided much of the storyline, outlined some possibilities and I devised others. I chose to skip the multiple-outcomes quandary and leave it ambiguous. But what *could* happen next?
* Nobody opens the box. The guys pass out. Grace makes her escape, either scooting back home, or heading into Benito's bed, very horny.
* Before Benito arrives, Grace hears comments about what a cheating pussy hound he is and would always be. She decides to fuck everyone there in revenge -- with Benito watching, humiliated or not.
* Drunken Benny takes the challenge and pokes his cock into the box, first in Grace's mouth and then in her anus. He's likely too drunk to do a good job.
* Maybe the real stripper-hooker finally arrives. "Then who is in the box?"
* Benny opens the box. Grace is revealed. Benny either 1) goes ballistic and kicks her out, 2) is shocked and helps her to safety, or 3) laughs and offers her to all his buddies. Orgy time!
* Benny opens the box and is delighted. "This is the best XMas present ever!" he cries. "We've got to do this every year from now on!"
No, I am not going to write those or any other endings, but you are welcome to try. Have fun!
Anticipation...
A naked girl in a box with holes in it: who wouldn't have an immediate anticipation of what comes next ?
You set a nice scene, then put the innocent damsel in classic distress. Very fun.
The only thing that put me off - and this is not the author's fault - is it was odd with how the page cut off: you have to go to page 2, anticipating something more, to find out the story was over on page 1.
Disappointing
Liked it a lot until the end, then lost all my enthusiasm.
great story
Great take on Ender27's suggestions.
My own version of the story will be released at the end of the month called Accidental Gangbang.
But yours will be tough to beat...but the idea was too good not to try.
Jasmine
Good luck in the contest; five stars form me.
more. it'd be nice if they pulled out her hands and legs. made her give handjobs and footjobs before the package is opened.
Cute
Enjoyed the story immensely. As Hypoxia says, future possibilities are legion and intriguing. Thank you
Lame
You seem to nothing about human anatomy. Not only would a female body not be positioned correctly in a tight space, these men must all have freakishly long fingers and cocks for this kind of action. Unless this was meant to be satire?
Shocking!
I'm sorry but I'm shocked at myself for how much I LOVED this story. I would have loved to be the bride in the box, but I'd never have the guts to go through with it.
Story Comparison
Read this entry and "Accidental Gangbang" by silkstockingslover. While I enjoyed this story, ssl's take is a more fleshed out one. It gets my vote.
And?????
I really liked this, but so want to know what happens next.
Oppps
This is truly a story about being careful what you wish for. Well written. Feel very sorry for the young woman who had saved herself only to get gangbanged.
Repost
"Accidental Gangbang" by silkstockingslover.. sorry hypoxia yours does not match up.
@jimbo: mine was first
My story posted 16 days before silkstockinglover's. Get your timelines straight.
Great story
Hot story. Love to read more!
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