Holy FUCK. That was incredible. Please write more!
Just sorry I can not give you something higher. You rock girl and I am impressed.
Excellent story Kyla_girl....Part three was your best so far! A few areas for improvement in story lay out, but content was top notch. Your scene work was HOT! Keep writing.
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Holy FUCK. That was incredible. Please write more!
Fivers again
Just sorry I can not give you something higher. You rock girl and I am impressed.
Best so Far!
Excellent story Kyla_girl....Part three was your best so far! A few areas for improvement in story lay out, but content was top notch. Your scene work was HOT! Keep writing.
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