Umm, welcome ducky...
A nice first story. Solid skills. This is both sparse and detailed, a tricky combination to master.
You definitely cultivated the danger element. This leaves me with my noncon brain worm quivering and the dead-in-a-ditch alarm blaring. I'm an old fuddy-duddy, so those things don't excited me in good ways. However, there is a solid fan-base for those things around here. I hope they come out and vote/comment for you.
Consider categories well for future stories. Playing along to stay alive is not bdsm submission. ;)
That's not the first time I've heard of a Master liking blood. Mine does, but in this story, it's not true BDSM. BDSM is a kind of relationship between a Master and his submissive. There's more love and trust.
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Umm, welcome ducky...
A nice first story. Solid skills. This is both sparse and detailed, a tricky combination to master.
You definitely cultivated the danger element. This leaves me with my noncon brain worm quivering and the dead-in-a-ditch alarm blaring. I'm an old fuddy-duddy, so those things don't excited me in good ways. However, there is a solid fan-base for those things around here. I hope they come out and vote/comment for you.
Consider categories well for future stories. Playing along to stay alive is not bdsm submission. ;)
Wrong category.
FA_JF is right. Taking a knife to a girl without her consent is best posted under other categories. Otherwise, fairly good writing.
Not the only one?
That's not the first time I've heard of a Master liking blood. Mine does, but in this story, it's not true BDSM. BDSM is a kind of relationship between a Master and his submissive. There's more love and trust.
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