Another great installment in this series but if the end of the story is true, then this series has sadly come to an end with Jack. Excellent use of words to describe your interlude. Two unselfish lovers who want nothing more than to please each other rather than be the center of attention. Very sensual and loving. Looking foward to see if Melanie explores her desire for women in future stories...
More please!
delightful...please keep going. Great writing, good length of each chapter. Teasing us all for more !
Another winner!
Another great installment in this series but if the end of the story is true, then this series has sadly come to an end with Jack. Excellent use of words to describe your interlude. Two unselfish lovers who want nothing more than to please each other rather than be the center of attention. Very sensual and loving. Looking foward to see if Melanie explores her desire for women in future stories...
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